Hi My Dear Ones,,
Oh Ye Princes,,,
Byootafull are U,,,,,,,,,, I stand in awhhhh ,
and some of U have thought that I have put Myself above U,,,,,,,,,,,,,, interesting,,,
I sit with U ,, on the same
'plain',, the same throne as U would try to identifie,,,,,,
My ''awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh'',, is just something I perceive before U,,, like if U were My brother or sister in an Bus on a Highway,, and I was in the front seat,, and U were in the back of the bus,,,,,,,,,,,,,and I saw a Wonderful thing beside the road,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and I yelled it out befor U,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I AM not any greater than U,, just posisioned better for a moment.
I Love U ,, I love U all in this Bus that We are in,,, I Love U,,, Precious U are,, more than all the stars or wealth U see,,
Dream Big Little Ones,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I Love U,, all Ye Princes,,,, : )
Comments
I think the main problem is that you refer to everyone as "little ones".
Seriously, you sound like a child in my ears. To be called a "little one" from a child, while I myself is an old fart, is provocative to say the least.
If your goal is to not project a superior attitude, you should probably cut down on the whole "everyone on earth are My children"-attitude. At least when it comes to interaction with the "children" (you can still THINK that you're the mother/father of all, just don't SAY it).
Kids don't like to be called Kids, no matter which age they may have or have not reached yet. :)
Personally I look forward to when you get out of the "one-liner fluff"-stage and enter the "argue your point"-stage. :)