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  Light Being November 13, 2012 at 1:44pm

  Dear Rev….the poems is very good, written well, the colours mostly gel together, some inconsistencies, there is some aural spraying and a few places where the hue is slightly displaced, the music/sounds are generally consistent, but there is a little bit of discord in places matching the spraying and hue displacement. However, overall its ok and I like it on a conditional level.

  IF and I mean if it was my rendition I probably would pay attention to the inconsistent and discordant patterns i.e.; play around with the tones (possibly alter the pitch) and hues and match it to the flow of movement.

  Meaning; I would change some of the words as they are out of alignment, alter part of the sequence as it changes abruptly and flips to much, change the speed to a much slower smoother path with out the bumpy humps, as being smacked of the walls is uncomfortable, not painful just lose some momentum, but in either case that’s just my opinion.

  Sorry if the above constructive criticism is seemly a little weird, as I have "Synaesthesia" and I see Art and poetry in colour, hue’s and sound. Art produces music, tones and feelings i.e. taste and personalities etc. Some forms of art ‘sing’ with tones that touch my skin like feathers or even needles dependant on the art depiction.

  But I would not unite these pics with a nice poem like this, but then I’m biased especially with fractural art.  

  Almost all types of fractural art can leave me feeling quite ill, feel sick or even cause me to loose consciousness momentarily; very few of these actually evoke beautiful music or ‘sing’ harmoniously. So the artwork is a no-no for me, the middle one is ok to look at though not for long, the other two I dare not look at for more than a few seconds, one is worse than the other. 

  Each to their own, I view it as don’t look at and it move on, I may not be able to tolerate the awful frequency and vibes etc, but others may, so it is all in the beholder.
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  rev.joshua skirvin November 13, 2012 at 10:47am

  I like these pics. And sense I wrote a new poem, I thought they would go together, a gift to you. The poem is for Ascension. I named it 11/11 ''Follow in the way'' Keep up the good work, not much time left now. L&L, Adonai
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  rev.joshua skirvin November 13, 2012 at 10:44am

  Awakened I follow in the way appointed to me,

  by the Creator Father,whom all want to see.

  Therein lies my Salvation and my happiness,

  everything I strive for, this is my eternal bliss.

  My God is more than one can describe,

  to share in his existence, do I subscribe.

  The matchless Love of his innate  personality,

  drives me forth,forever to change this reality.

  To one of Love, a nature that is to become mine,

  and not alone,or lost nor forgotten in time.

  Its but the Dream we agreed to, a long time ago,

  to give courage to the heart of hearts and the soul.

  When asked,where is it that we really wont to be,

  my answer then,is a state of mind in spirituality.

  Be still, mind, the tides ebb flows forever onward,

  know its a place, where we can go eternally forward.

  Sorry ,but there's no stopping now or turning back,

  Ascend ever upwards on this Dimensional time-track.

  And then to remember what we have never lost,

  to re-claim the key to our inheritance,we exhaust.

  A game of hide and seek,played with ourselves,

  to bring it all back to the Creator Father himself.

  We are all part of Gods great Divine eternal mind,

  never to be lost again forever in space and time.

  But nothing can be done if we choose to work alone,

  we must bring our brothers with us to get back home.

  For we are all one in tis cosmic Creators family,

  true forgiveness allows love to flow on inwardly.

  Now I invoke the higher self to come forth today,

  for to help me make this Peace and Love stay.

  For he is that prodigal son of God that lives within,

  he's our ticket home when we meld and let him in.

  Amen

  11/11 Rev. Joshua Skirvin / Adonai